https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?feed=atom&target=%E5%90%B4%E4%BF%8A%E6%9E%A2&title=%E7%89%B9%E6%AE%8A%3A%E7%94%A8%E6%88%B7%E8%B4%A1%E7%8C%AE 2026-09-07T21:26:33Z 出自Joyouswriting MediaWiki 1.15.1 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A3_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%847 2011-06-03T07:35:07Z

<p>吴俊枢:&#32;</p> <hr /> <div>加油！<br /> 曾子欣评：继续加油！<br /> <br /> 写的很好，字数有400字了。<br /> 杨捷凯评：你们还要继续加油。<br /> <br /> 俊枢评;吴国栋你们要加油!</div>

吴俊枢 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A3_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%845 2011-06-03T07:32:58Z

<p>吴俊枢:&#32;</p> <hr /> <div>请你们继续哦！<br /> 字太少了，变化太快了。<br /> 曾子欣评：你们要加油，字太少了<br /> 国栋评：你们的话太啰嗦了，就像流水帐一样，速度要再快一点哦！<br /> 俊枢评;吴国栋，说的很对 <br /> <br /> 浩安评:写的太少了，继续加油!</div>

吴俊枢 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A3_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%8410 2011-06-03T07:27:43Z

<p>吴俊枢:&#32;</p> <hr /> <div>浩瀚评；第一段写得太少了！<br /> 曾子欣评：写的再多一点！<br /> 俊枢评：字太少了，要加油！</div>

吴俊枢 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A3_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%845 2011-06-03T07:19:02Z

<p>吴俊枢:&#32;</p> <hr /> <div>请你们继续哦！<br /> 字太少了，变化太快了。<br /> 你们要加油字太少了</div>

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