https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:D_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&action=history 本站上此页的修订历史 zh-cn MediaWiki 1.15.1 Tue, 08 Sep 2026 13:25:57 GMT https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:D_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=1448&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2010年12月28日 (二) 13:13所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第4行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第4行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>屈碧岩评：写的很好，写出了小作者对英法联军恨之入骨。(屈碧岩)</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>屈碧岩评：写的很好，写出了小作者对英法联军恨之入骨。(屈碧岩)</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">圆明园是一座皇家园林，的确让人惋惜，但更多的是让我痛恨。因为只要现在还活着的人们都没有见到过真正的、完整的圆明园，而现在，圆明园只剩下了圆明园的遗址。作文写得是好，但是为什么那么多人以《圆明园的毁灭》来写读后感呢？换个崭新的题目可能更会吸引同学们的注意吧！（黄雯婷）</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-08 13:25:57 --> </table> Tue, 28 Dec 2010 13:13:26 GMT 13黄雯婷 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:D_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:D_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=1425&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2010年12月20日 (一) 13:38所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第2行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第2行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>很好，不过文章题目不新颖！！！加油！（陈嘉茵）</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>很好，不过文章题目不新颖！！！加油！（陈嘉茵）</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; 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color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">写的不错，写了圆明园的毁灭，圆明园以前的辉煌和你对英法联军他们的仇恨。&nbsp; 第11小组&nbsp; </del>黄俊雅</div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">写的不错，写了圆明园的毁灭，圆明园以前的辉煌和你对英法联军他们的仇恨。第11小组 </ins>黄俊雅</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>&#160;</div></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>很好，不过文章题目不新颖！！！加油！（陈嘉茵）</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>很好，不过文章题目不新颖！！！加油！（陈嘉茵）</div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-08 13:25:57 --> </table> Mon, 20 Dec 2010 13:22:35 GMT 12chenjiayin https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:D_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:D_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=1422&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2010年12月20日 (一) 13:22所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>写的不错，写了圆明园的毁灭，圆明园以前的辉煌和你对英法联军他们的仇恨。&nbsp; 第11小组&nbsp; 黄俊雅</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>写的不错，写了圆明园的毁灭，圆明园以前的辉煌和你对英法联军他们的仇恨。&nbsp; 第11小组&nbsp; 黄俊雅</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">很好，不过文章题目不新颖！！！加油！（陈嘉茵）</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-08 13:25:57 --> </table> Mon, 20 Dec 2010 13:22:09 GMT 12chenjiayin https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:D_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:D_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=1404&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; 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