https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:C_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&action=history 本站上此页的修订历史 zh-cn MediaWiki 1.15.1 Wed, 09 Sep 2026 05:29:35 GMT https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:C_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=1300&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2010年12月5日 (日) 13:16所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第3行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第3行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>你写的很好，但是你的好词好句太少了；你的格式不正确。</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>你写的很好，但是你的好词好句太少了；你的格式不正确。</div></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'>-</td><td style="background: #ffa; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">黄家琪评：你们写的很好，但是好词好句太少了，还有格式不正确，希望你们下次改正。</del></div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">黄家琪评：你们写的很好，但是好词好句太少了，还有格式不正确，希望你们下次改正。屈碧岩评</ins>:你们写的很好，好词好句很多，不足的是，作文排版不好。</div></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'>-</td><td style="background: #ffa; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 屈碧岩评</del>:你们写的很好，好词好句很多，不足的是，作文排版不好。</div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-09 05:29:35 --> </table> Sun, 05 Dec 2010 13:16:51 GMT 屈碧岩 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:C_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:C_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=1299&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2010年12月5日 (日) 13:14所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第4行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第4行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; 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&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 屈碧岩评:你们写的很好，好词好句很多，不足的是，作文排版不好。</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-09 05:29:35 --> </table> Sun, 05 Dec 2010 13:14:30 GMT 屈碧岩 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:C_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:C_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=1298&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2010年12月5日 (日) 11:57所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第2行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第2行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>你写的很好，但是你的好词好句太少了；你的格式不正确。</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>你写的很好，但是你的好词好句太少了；你的格式不正确。</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">黄家琪评：你们写的很好，但是好词好句太少了，还有格式不正确，希望你们下次改正。</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-09 05:29:35 --> </table> Sun, 05 Dec 2010 11:57:51 GMT 黄家琪2 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:C_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:C_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=1297&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2010年12月5日 (日) 11:55所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>邓奕菲评：小组3写得非常好，好词好句多，不足的是，小组3的作文排版不太好看，有一些语句不太通顺，希望及时改正。继续努力，加油！</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>邓奕菲评：小组3写得非常好，好词好句多，不足的是，小组3的作文排版不太好看，有一些语句不太通顺，希望及时改正。继续努力，加油！</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">你写的很好，但是你的好词好句太少了；你的格式不正确。</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-09 05:29:35 --> </table> Sun, 05 Dec 2010 11:55:39 GMT 黄家琪2 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:C_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:C_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=1273&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2010年12月5日 (日) 04:12所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'>-</td><td style="background: #ffa; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">小组3写得非常好，好词好句多，不足的是，小组3的作文排版不太好看，有一些语句不太通顺，希望及时改正。继续努力，加油！</del></div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">邓奕菲评：小组3写得非常好，好词好句多，不足的是，小组3的作文排版不太好看，有一些语句不太通顺，希望及时改正。继续努力，加油！</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-09 05:29:35 --> </table> Sun, 05 Dec 2010 04:12:49 GMT 4奕菲 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:C_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:C_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=1272&oldid=prev <p>创建新页面为 &#39;小组3写得非常好，好词好句多，不足的是，小组3的作文排版不太好看，有一些语句不太通顺，希望及时改正。继续努力，加油！&#39;</p> <p><b>新建页面</b></p><div>小组3写得非常好，好词好句多，不足的是，小组3的作文排版不太好看，有一些语句不太通顺，希望及时改正。继续努力，加油！</div> Sun, 05 Dec 2010 04:11:55 GMT 4奕菲 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:C_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843