https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:A_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%844&action=history 本站上此页的修订历史 zh-cn MediaWiki 1.15.1 Tue, 08 Sep 2026 20:31:27 GMT https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:A_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%844&diff=1205&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2010年11月25日 (四) 12:56所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第2行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第2行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>&nbsp; &nbsp;</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>&nbsp; &nbsp;</div></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>小作者写的桃子有一些地方没具体的说清楚，不过小作者写的还是挺好的。继续努力哦。加油。</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>小作者写的桃子有一些地方没具体的说清楚，不过小作者写的还是挺好的。继续努力哦。加油。</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 汤婷珊评</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-08 20:31:27 --> </table> Thu, 25 Nov 2010 12:56:50 GMT 5婷珊 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:A_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%844 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:A_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%844&diff=1204&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2010年11月25日 (四) 12:56所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>小作者的作文写得很好，写了桃子的好处和坏处，好词好句用的都恰当。</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>小作者的作文写得很好，写了桃子的好处和坏处，好词好句用的都恰当。</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"> </ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">小作者写的桃子有一些地方没具体的说清楚，不过小作者写的还是挺好的。继续努力哦。加油。</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-08 20:31:27 --> </table> Thu, 25 Nov 2010 12:56:14 GMT 5婷珊 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:A_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%844 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:A_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%844&diff=1133&oldid=prev <p>创建新页面为 &#39;小作者的作文写得很好，写了桃子的好处和坏处，好词好句用的都恰当。&#39;</p> <p><b>新建页面</b></p><div>小作者的作文写得很好，写了桃子的好处和坏处，好词好句用的都恰当。</div> Sun, 31 Oct 2010 03:30:01 GMT 3张家源 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:A_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%844