https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A3_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&action=history 本站上此页的修订历史 zh-cn MediaWiki 1.15.1 Tue, 08 Sep 2026 14:42:17 GMT https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A3_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=2530&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2011年6月3日 (五) 07:43所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第15行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第15行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>写的不错，继续努力！（黄梓效）</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>写的不错，继续努力！（黄梓效）</div></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 哇！真有趣，加油（周卓）</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 哇！真有趣，加油（周卓）</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">泽鑫评：写得很好 ，但字太少了，继续努力！</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-08 14:42:17 --> </table> Fri, 03 Jun 2011 07:43:53 GMT Zexin https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A3_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A3_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=2525&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2011年6月3日 (五) 07:43所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第14行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第14行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>&nbsp; &nbsp;</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>&nbsp; &nbsp;</div></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>写的不错，继续努力！（黄梓效）</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>写的不错，继续努力！（黄梓效）</div></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'>-</td><td style="background: #ffa; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>哇！真有趣，加油（周卓）</div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; </ins>哇！真有趣，加油（周卓）</div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-08 14:42:17 --> </table> Fri, 03 Jun 2011 07:43:09 GMT 周卓 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A3_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A3_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=2523&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2011年6月3日 (五) 07:42所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第14行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第14行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>&nbsp; &nbsp;</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>&nbsp; &nbsp;</div></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>写的不错，继续努力！（黄梓效）</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>写的不错，继续努力！（黄梓效）</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">哇！真有趣，加油（周卓）</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-08 14:42:17 --> </table> Fri, 03 Jun 2011 07:42:36 GMT 周卓 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A3_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A3_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=2495&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2011年6月3日 (五) 07:38所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第12行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第12行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>幸波评：“你们会用一条漆黑的隧道和奶油做成的城堡——蛋糕城”来写，真的很有趣。加油！</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>幸波评：“你们会用一条漆黑的隧道和奶油做成的城堡——蛋糕城”来写，真的很有趣。加油！</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"> </ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">写的不错，继续努力！（黄梓效）</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-08 14:42:17 --> </table> Fri, 03 Jun 2011 07:38:12 GMT 梓效 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A3_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A3_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=2487&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2011年6月3日 (五) 07:36所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第10行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第10行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>你们写的蛋糕城虽然写的很好，但是字数太少，希望你们继续加油。</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>你们写的蛋糕城虽然写的很好，但是字数太少，希望你们继续加油。</div></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>哇塞！我也好想去啊！呵呵，加油！（利新宇）</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>哇塞！我也好想去啊！呵呵，加油！（利新宇）</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">幸波评：“你们会用一条漆黑的隧道和奶油做成的城堡——蛋糕城”来写，真的很有趣。加油！</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-08 14:42:17 --> </table> Fri, 03 Jun 2011 07:36:58 GMT 幸波 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A3_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A3_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=2484&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2011年6月3日 (五) 07:36所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第9行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第9行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>你们写的蛋糕城虽然写的很好，但是字数太少，希望你们继续加油。</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>你们写的蛋糕城虽然写的很好，但是字数太少，希望你们继续加油。</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">哇塞！我也好想去啊！呵呵，加油！（利新宇）</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-08 14:42:17 --> </table> Fri, 03 Jun 2011 07:36:39 GMT Ky-利新宇 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A3_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A3_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=2452&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2011年6月3日 (五) 07:31所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>你们写的蛋糕城写的很好，你们继续加油。</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>你们写的蛋糕城写的很好，你们继续加油。</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>曾子欣评：继续加油哦！</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>曾子欣评：继续加油哦！</div></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>太有趣了，特别是那句：真是飞流直下三千尺，疑是奶油落九天！！！”</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>太有趣了，特别是那句：真是飞流直下三千尺，疑是奶油落九天！！！”</div></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>你们写的蛋糕城很好，但是你们写的字数太少了，继续加油！</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>你们写的蛋糕城很好，但是你们写的字数太少了，继续加油！</div></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'>-</td><td style="background: #ffa; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><del style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></del></div></td><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>你们富有想象力，但是语句有点不通顺，字数有点少。（胜文评）</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>你们富有想象力，但是语句有点不通顺，字数有点少。（胜文评）</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">你们写的蛋糕城虽然写的很好，但是字数太少，希望你们继续加油。</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-08 14:42:17 --> </table> Fri, 03 Jun 2011 07:31:24 GMT Zhihao https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A3_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A3_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=2445&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2011年6月3日 (五) 07:29所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第4行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第4行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>你们写的蛋糕城很好，但是你们写的字数太少了，继续加油！</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>你们写的蛋糕城很好，但是你们写的字数太少了，继续加油！</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>你们富有想象力，但是语句有点不通顺，字数有点少。（胜文评）</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>你们富有想象力，但是语句有点不通顺，字数有点少。（胜文评）</div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-08 14:42:17 --> </table> Fri, 03 Jun 2011 07:29:18 GMT 胜文 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A3_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A3_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=2443&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2011年6月3日 (五) 07:28所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第4行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第4行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>你们写的蛋糕城很好，但是你们写的字数太少了，继续加油！</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>你们写的蛋糕城很好，但是你们写的字数太少了，继续加油！</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">你们富有想象力，但是语句有点不通顺，字数有点少。（胜文评）</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-08 14:42:17 --> </table> Fri, 03 Jun 2011 07:28:56 GMT 胜文 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A3_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A3_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=2426&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2011年6月3日 (五) 07:25所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第2行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第2行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>曾子欣评：继续加油哦！</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>曾子欣评：继续加油哦！</div></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>太有趣了，特别是那句：真是飞流直下三千尺，疑是奶油落九天！！！”</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>太有趣了，特别是那句：真是飞流直下三千尺，疑是奶油落九天！！！”</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">你们写的蛋糕城很好，但是你们写的字数太少了，继续加油！</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-08 14:42:17 --> </table> Fri, 03 Jun 2011 07:25:21 GMT 梓康 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A3_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843