https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%844&action=history 本站上此页的修订历史 zh-cn MediaWiki 1.15.1 Mon, 07 Sep 2026 20:24:20 GMT https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%844&diff=2539&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2011年6月3日 (五) 07:47所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第9行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第9行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>我给95分</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>我给95分</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">何泽慧评：我给98分。</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-07 20:24:20 --> </table> Fri, 03 Jun 2011 07:47:47 GMT 何泽慧 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%844 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%844&diff=1828&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2011年4月25日 (一) 07:03所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第7行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第7行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>写的很好加油</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>写的很好加油</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">我给95分</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-07 20:24:20 --> </table> Mon, 25 Apr 2011 07:03:56 GMT 陈焕洲 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%844 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%844&diff=1825&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2011年4月25日 (一) 07:03所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第5行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第5行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>加油！你们一定行的。</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>加油！你们一定行的。</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">写的很好加油</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-07 20:24:20 --> </table> Mon, 25 Apr 2011 07:03:33 GMT 智炜 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%844 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%844&diff=1811&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2011年4月25日 (一) 07:01所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第3行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第3行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>你们用了很多好词来描写蜗牛，乌龟，蝴蝶，蜻蜓的特点。可是你们写蜻蜓的时候不够突出。</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>你们用了很多好词来描写蜗牛，乌龟，蝴蝶，蜻蜓的特点。可是你们写蜻蜓的时候不够突出。</div></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>好。</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>好。</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">加油！你们一定行的。</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-07 20:24:20 --> </table> Mon, 25 Apr 2011 07:01:30 GMT 陈焕洲 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%844 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%844&diff=1809&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2011年4月25日 (一) 07:01所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第2行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第2行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>你们用了很多好词来描写蜗牛，乌龟，蝴蝶，蜻蜓的特点。可是你们写蜻蜓的时候不够突出。</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>你们用了很多好词来描写蜗牛，乌龟，蝴蝶，蜻蜓的特点。可是你们写蜻蜓的时候不够突出。</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">好。</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-07 20:24:20 --> </table> Mon, 25 Apr 2011 07:01:13 GMT Liting https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%844 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%844&diff=1789&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2011年4月25日 (一) 06:58所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>你的语言不够通顺，加油！</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>你的语言不够通顺，加油！</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">你们用了很多好词来描写蜗牛，乌龟，蝴蝶，蜻蜓的特点。可是你们写蜻蜓的时候不够突出。</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-07 20:24:20 --> </table> Mon, 25 Apr 2011 06:58:20 GMT 陈焕洲 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%844 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%844&diff=1752&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2011年4月25日 (一) 06:53所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'>-</td><td style="background: #ffa; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>&#160;</div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">你的语言不够通顺，加油！</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-07 20:24:20 --> </table> Mon, 25 Apr 2011 06:53:50 GMT 子欣 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%844 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%844&diff=1743&oldid=prev <p>清空页面</p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2011年4月25日 (一) 06:52所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'>-</td><td style="background: #ffa; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">写的不错，加油。</del></div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>&#160;</div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-07 20:24:20 --> </table> Mon, 25 Apr 2011 06:52:29 GMT 艺辉 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%844 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%844&diff=1713&oldid=prev <p>创建新页面为 &#39;写的不错，加油。&#39;</p> <p><b>新建页面</b></p><div>写的不错，加油。</div> Mon, 25 Apr 2011 06:46:45 GMT 艺辉 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%844