https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&action=history 本站上此页的修订历史 zh-cn MediaWiki 1.15.1 Wed, 09 Sep 2026 13:07:29 GMT https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=2104&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2011年5月13日 (五) 06:59所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第2行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第2行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>整篇文章的中心没有放在大自然是人类的老师身上,要先观察向日葵，再写写你要发明的东西，你的中心却是向日葵。</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>整篇文章的中心没有放在大自然是人类的老师身上,要先观察向日葵，再写写你要发明的东西，你的中心却是向日葵。</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">写的很好，加油&nbsp; &nbsp; 曾子欣</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-09 13:07:29 --> </table> Fri, 13 May 2011 06:59:19 GMT 子欣 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=1845&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2011年4月25日 (一) 13:23所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>好，但是要写多一点！</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>好，但是要写多一点！</div></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'>-</td><td style="background: #ffa; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>整篇文章的中心没有放在大自然是人类的老师身上,<del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">要先观察向日葵，再写写你要发明的东西，你的中心却是向日葵</del></div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>整篇文章的中心没有放在大自然是人类的老师身上,<ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">要先观察向日葵，再写写你要发明的东西，你的中心却是向日葵。</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-09 13:07:29 --> </table> Mon, 25 Apr 2011 13:23:23 GMT 幸伊 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=1844&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2011年4月25日 (一) 13:22所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>好，但是要写多一点！</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>好，但是要写多一点！</div></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'>-</td><td style="background: #ffa; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>整篇文章的中心没有放在大自然是人类的老师身上,<del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">要先观察向日葵，再写写你要发明的东西</del></div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>整篇文章的中心没有放在大自然是人类的老师身上,<ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">要先观察向日葵，再写写你要发明的东西，你的中心却是向日葵</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-09 13:07:29 --> </table> Mon, 25 Apr 2011 13:22:59 GMT 幸伊 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=1843&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2011年4月25日 (一) 13:21所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>好，但是要写多一点！</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>好，但是要写多一点！</div></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'>-</td><td style="background: #ffa; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>整篇文章的中心没有放在大自然是人类的老师身上</div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>整篇文章的中心没有放在大自然是人类的老师身上<ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">,要先观察向日葵，再写写你要发明的东西</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-09 13:07:29 --> </table> Mon, 25 Apr 2011 13:21:11 GMT 幸伊 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=1842&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2011年4月25日 (一) 13:15所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'>-</td><td style="background: #ffa; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">好，但是要写多一点</del></div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">好，但是要写多一点！</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'>-</td><td style="background: #ffa; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">整篇文章的中心没有</del></div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>&#160;</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">整篇文章的中心没有放在大自然是人类的老师身上</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-09 13:07:29 --> </table> Mon, 25 Apr 2011 13:15:02 GMT 幸伊 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=1841&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2011年4月25日 (一) 13:12所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>好，但是要写多一点</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>好，但是要写多一点</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2">&nbsp;</td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins style="color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">整篇文章的中心没有</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-09 13:07:29 --> </table> Mon, 25 Apr 2011 13:12:14 GMT 幸伊 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=1802&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2011年4月25日 (一) 07:00所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'>-</td><td style="background: #ffa; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>&#160;</div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">好，但是要写多一点</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-09 13:07:29 --> </table> Mon, 25 Apr 2011 07:00:39 GMT 圳文 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=1781&oldid=prev <p>清空页面</p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2011年4月25日 (一) 06:57所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'>-</td><td style="background: #ffa; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">你的语言不够通顺，加油！</del></div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>&#160;</div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-09 13:07:29 --> </table> Mon, 25 Apr 2011 06:57:18 GMT 徐逸 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=1748&oldid=prev <p></p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2011年4月25日 (一) 06:53所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'>-</td><td style="background: #ffa; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>&#160;</div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">你的语言不够通顺，加油！</ins></div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-09 13:07:29 --> </table> Mon, 25 Apr 2011 06:53:24 GMT 子欣 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php?title=%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843&diff=1737&oldid=prev <p>清空页面</p> <table style="background-color: white; color:black;"> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <col class='diff-marker' /> <col class='diff-content' /> <tr valign='top'> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">←上一修订</td> <td colspan='2' style="background-color: white; color:black;">在2011年4月25日 (一) 06:52所做的修订版本</td> </tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">第1行：</td></tr> <tr><td class='diff-marker'>-</td><td style="background: #ffa; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div><del class="diffchange diffchange-inline">写的太少。</del></div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;"><div>&#160;</div></td></tr> <!-- diff generator: internal 2026-09-09 13:07:29 --> </table> Mon, 25 Apr 2011 06:52:09 GMT 艺辉 https://mail.joyouswriting.com/index.php/%E8%AE%A8%E8%AE%BA:%E2%85%A0_%E5%B0%8F%E7%BB%843